Dysfunctional Moment

Fiction only

Erectile Complications

Dropping in

At inopportune time

Softening the moment

Of raw heat

With downy despair

A limp member 

Staring downward

In silken frustration

A lover's night

Defiled by a cottony embrace

In a gentile place.

Reviews

[David Scott]

Actually, this is not a laughable as we might wish it to be. Living with passion is often thwarted by our physical bodies. People suffer from ED for a multitude of reasons and it tends to snowball once it becomes a problem. Sexual education is lacking so much still with our society. Relational and communicational dysfunction often go hand in hand with these issues.
Great to broach the topic with humor however.
Great write.

[JC]

hey, sometimes whiskey dick is just a fact of life... well written and fun to read.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is what my muse was telling at me to write. It's been awhile since I have written anything, especially something comical

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a wry humor in this one...really could play on words---no frustration for the reader...even if there is for the two characters involved in the poem.