Lover's Dance

Rippling scarlet tides

Push me closer

Showering me

In ardent notes

 

Glinting ruby rays

Shine down below

Hearts pulsing

Sprinkled with love

 

Between rose colored

Clouds of cotton candy

Mythical dreams

That taste of

Raspberry cream

 

Entranced lovers

Magically dance

Upon a tranquil sea

Of fuchsia and pink

 

Among sparkling fields

Of jasmine’s splendor

Enveloping with desire

Broadcasting romance

Entwined in fire.

Reviews

[rottinghexgrl]

This is a beautiful piece, the photo is breathtaking and I definitely understand what you are trying to say. one recommendation I have is to read it out loud to yourself. i do this with my writing and i find it very helpful. This is a beautiful piece :) you work is simply amazing.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I will read it to myself out loud but this is a free verse piece and I have reworked it a couple of times.

[LadyAnn68]

Absolutely terrific, very descriptive,,,love the cotton candy clouds

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to get creative sometimes and I think it helps with the imagery.

[Shaquana Adams]

Enveloping with desire
Broadcasting romance
Entwined in fire.

Nice picture, even nicer poem. I really like the way you write. Good job :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you liked those last lines. I thought it was a nice way to tie all of this together.

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Loving the color red references throughout a great write!

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to add color to poems when possible. I think it helps with the feel of the poem and allows better visuals.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A delicious mix of romance and sensuality.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. How are you feeling Cowboy? Good to see you on here. You have been missed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome… and thank you, It is good to be back.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What a whirlwind of extravagance, Poetic Beauty!

Your pen name suits your style of writing, perfectly!...

This is a breathtaking enchantment... full of Romance!~xoxo~:)

[Poetic Beauty]

I had a picture in my mind to two lovers dancing on pink clouds surrounded by rays colored in ruby and they were close dancing.

[Adam Whitworth]

Some good words here, well done. I think it still needs some work.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks for your input. I am glad you enjoyed the words. I have worked this poem a couple times and I like how it is right now.

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful pics in your words and wonderful images...Bravo......

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you liked the imagery in this piece. In my mind I pictured two lovers in a dancing embrace among pink clouds and warm sunshine.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good one...You are welcome...:)...................

[Madalyn Beck]

This painted a beautiful picture in my mind. Love really is the most stunning and artful of emotions. Great write, my dear!

[Poetic Beauty]

Love is one of the most magical emotions.

[A. Amos]

Good write my friend and i truly enjoyed..... Thanks for posting

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you enjoyed reading this piece.