Lover's Dance

Rippling scarlet tides

Push me closer

Showering me

In ardent notes

 

Glinting ruby rays

Shine down below

Hearts pulsing

Sprinkled with love

 

Between rose colored

Clouds of cotton candy

Mythical dreams

That taste of

Raspberry cream

 

Entranced lovers

Magically dance

Upon a tranquil sea

Of fuchsia and pink

 

Among sparkling fields

Of jasmine’s splendor

Enveloping with desire

Broadcasting romance

Entwined in fire.

Reviews

[rottinghexgrl]

This is a beautiful piece, the photo is breathtaking and I definitely understand what you are trying to say. one recommendation I have is to read it out loud to yourself. i do this with my writing and i find it very helpful. This is a beautiful piece :) you work is simply amazing.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I will read it to myself out loud but this is a free verse piece and I have reworked it a couple of times.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Such A beautiful work, very colourful thought

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to use color and in my poems.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Vry Charming style

[Coyote Poetry]

Dance and love. Two nice places to know and be. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.

[redflutterby]

Oh this is a lovely poem....the wording is divine and the flow is perfection. Fantastic...

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. It has been awhile since I wrote this one and been quite some time since I read it.

[Enigma]

Loved the use of imagery here. Such a colorful piece. Loved it. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the color red. It is fiery and passionate in my opinion.

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

A truly fantastic piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for taking the time to read it. I am glad you enjoy this poem.

[Pax Analog]

Lovely lush synesthetic weave of soulsensuous sensorium. Ardor indeed is world-making.

[Poetic Beauty]

Love comes in so many forms. I am glad you liked this piece.

[William Evictus]

Absolutely fantastic. Every word brought an image into my head and I could see it all

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad my words allowed you to envision this piece within your mind.

[Ladysue]

romantic and sensual..loved that last line..your thoughts and emotions flowed beautifully..I enjoyed your imagery..

[Poetic Beauty]

I had a great Vallentines Day and this piece is similar to the emotion I felt yesterday.

[Ladysue]

Beautiful.. :)

[Jack...]

Beautifully colorful and loving my friend. You paint the heart and its feelings so vividly. Nice done.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you could feel the emotion in this piece.

[Ruth]

What a stunning print of the heart! Left me not only in awe but swirling in glorious tones of romantic vibrancy...beautiful hon xx

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you were swirling in these red tones of ardent pleasure.