Earth's Song

Tribute to Larry Dyson I picture him saying these words.

Listen

Listen

To the beat

Beat of the drum

Earth

Mother Earth

Sing her song

 

Feel

Feel

The vibrations

Beneath your feet

Pulsing

Humming

Telling her story

 

Look

Look

Beyond your door

A world awaits

Shining

Shimmering

With visual appeal

 

Savor

Savor

Delectable fruits

Salivate for more

Nature

Nature produces

Forever more

 

Aroma

Aroma

Oh so divine

Sooth the senses

Loam

Fertile loam’s

Scent under your feet

 

Dance

Dance

Rejoice each day

Respect each creature

Of land

And sea

Reviews

[Lorry]

It reads to me like a whisper, making the audience pay more attention to what is being said and joining the connection that the speaker feels.
I know it wasn't spoken word, but it was in my head as i read it, to the sound of a gentle breeze or waves lapping onto a beach.
Would definitely suit that, despite my spoken voice sounding like i gargle gravel each morning 😀

[Poetic Beauty]

To me it has a beat and tempo so I agree with the spoken word aspect

[Lorry]

The beat could be a pulse/ heartbeat. You should give it a try, i can already hear it.

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh no I have a horrible speaking voice. Lol spoken word is not my thing

[Lorry]

I hear ya. Well, actually, i don't 😀

[Seanh12]

Wow very good, very describe well used image its very nice

[An owl on the moon]

The rhythm is so beautifully profound... lending itself so well to the senses all coming alive in your words. What a wonderful tribute!

[Poetic Beauty]

I have loved this piece since I wrote. I'm glad you liked the theme.

[Gregory Stires]

i love the feel of the poem. i like how the poem tells us to listen to mother earth sing which in my opinion is listening to things around us in nature.i love how you include what the earth gives us such as the fruits we eat. and that we should honor mother earth by rejoicing each day for the gifts she bestows upon us.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I think nature is beautiful and if we aren't careful we are going to ruin this planet without realizing it.

[Sean M. Addams]

Very uplifting piece liked the imagery in.this alot.. nice.job.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you Sean. I am glad you liked the imagery.

[Aehr]

Love how graceful and raw and amazing the vibe of the poem is. It's mildly tribal, but in a very tame way, if that makes sense. :D I loved the repetition. Well done. Xx.

[Poetic Beauty]

It does make sense and I am glad you liked the repetition I chose for this piece.

[Seanh12]

wow this is another great poem, i love how u describe stuff, i also love the words you use, I love the image you have chosen to use, great use of colours and well placed

[Poetic Beauty]

I like using colors in my pieces. I believe colors help set the ton and emotions for writing.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I loved the beat of this poem! A feel good reading poem! Excellent!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a feel good reading poem. Thank you kindly.

[KAREN]

Beautifully written! And paints a soothing picture!

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad this piece was soothing to you. I love Nature but I also wrote tribute to Larry Dyson.

[KAREN]

I really thought it was an excellent write!