what a great description of an everyday activity...and how unappreciated that activity actually is...we think usually of only the purpose of the shower...not the benefit of relaxation.
it is likened to the idea that it's the journey that matters, not necessarily the destination.
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I am glad you liked this piece and how it showed a different side to just taking a shower.
what a great description of an everyday activity...and how unappreciated that activity actually is...we think usually of only the purpose of the shower...not the benefit of relaxation.
it is likened to the idea that it's the journey that matters, not necessarily the destination.
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I am glad you liked this piece and how it showed a different side to just taking a shower.
How relaxing. This is exactly how I spent last night (along with doing some homework), except I took a bath and not a shower. There is something about water that is particularly tranquilizing. I must say that you captured the essence of that tranquility quite beautifully and quite simply.
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Thank you. I have to agree that water seems to sooth the soul on a level like nothing else.
I agree. A hot showing is needed to relieve the pain of a hard day. Nice description led to the true ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
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There is nothing quite like a hot shower on a cold day or after a stressful one.
Amazing how something as simple as a shower can refresh mind, body, and spirit. Beautifully written. Great imagery. Lydi**
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In the US we tend to rush rush rush and hurry hurry hurry. Taking time and slowing down to have a l.. read moreIn the US we tend to rush rush rush and hurry hurry hurry. Taking time and slowing down to have a little me time is all that is need. Weather it be a warm sultry shower or a walk in the park.
A great rendering of living in the now. Sensation, awareness, a melting ease. A natural and much sought after state of being.
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I have found that this is one of the easiest and simplest ways to wash away aggravation and grim of .. read moreI have found that this is one of the easiest and simplest ways to wash away aggravation and grim of the day.
Excellent the way you drew us in to your liquid comfort.. My first thought was alcohol when I read the title then not sure it was perhaps a bit erotic.. The upbuild to the ending .. A nice hot Shower.. Just fantastic.. sR
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Thank you. I am glad this piece had a surprise ending.
First I thought you were writing this down, whilst sitting in a jacuzzi, but a shower, is just as brilliant as I read further, on your ending. Such a bliss to have one in your home, :) those little things, and happiness can bring us joy of a long day, suffered, and rejuvenate us... like teens... if we don't watch out ;)
Lovely poetic piece my dear friend, you always give some zen to the cafe, wich I love and appreciate.
- Elisa
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I Love to write about a great many things. I am glad you found a zen moment here.
First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
Secondly be kind to each .. more..