Amazing and beautiful flow of words and thoughts.
"A potpourri of emotions
Fly through the night
Plum voracity
Starting vibes anew"
I loved the above lines my dear friend. the poem was colorful and amazing.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Thank you. This is an old one that I’m fond of and it haven’t posted any of my new poems recentl.. read moreThank you. This is an old one that I’m fond of and it haven’t posted any of my new poems recently
3 Years Ago
I enjoyed the poem my dear friend and you are welcome.
Definitely my kind
of purple delights
running throughout
this lovely poem;
A potpourri of emotions
surface ..purple soothes
my soul it's a spiritual
color for me..i love
reds also it's my personality
wonderfully written poem
Nice Work!
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Purple is calming and romantic for me. I also like deeper shades of red green and blue.
Amazing and beautiful flow of words and thoughts.
"A potpourri of emotions
Fly through the night
Plum voracity
Starting vibes anew"
I loved the above lines my dear friend. the poem was colorful and amazing.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Thank you. This is an old one that I’m fond of and it haven’t posted any of my new poems recentl.. read moreThank you. This is an old one that I’m fond of and it haven’t posted any of my new poems recently
3 Years Ago
I enjoyed the poem my dear friend and you are welcome.
Lavender, wind chimes and purple. We share those. Purple and all shades of it are favourites of mine. This is a beautiful poem filled with fragrance, scented and carried on air. So uplifting and softly musical.PB.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Thank you Chris. Purple is my favorite but especially the darker hues. This is an old write. One of .. read moreThank you Chris. Purple is my favorite but especially the darker hues. This is an old write. One of my favorites.
hi Beauty! :) i saw your avatar and moniker on one of your reviews for jacob and just had to stop and read a bit ... your title is pretty emotive by itself and the font color when the poem popped up is striking ... interesting rhyme scheme .. was looking for the first 3 Vs to continue the same but you surprise me .. all the way through i kept thinking hmm this should be songs in lavender .. not purple ... so the calming theme also surprised me ... then V 5 & 6 comes the lavender, violet and plum (especially like the plum) is there a reason V4 L4 doesn't rhyme with dew and anew? i think it might gain strangth if it did (just an opinion) i am an introvert and particularly believe science and the arts compliment one another nicely so ... i am drawn to your "Molecular fusion" and mention of the ether ... lovely feelings of bliss and calm uplifting love in this ... clever title and use of purples ... enjoyed reading .. and nice to meet you!
E.
This poem was intended to be free verse and many of my free verse poems have some rhyme to them. Man.. read moreThis poem was intended to be free verse and many of my free verse poems have some rhyme to them. Many times I just can’t help myself and it simply happens.
4 Years Ago
ahhhhhhhh that would explain it then ... you haven't yet unshackled your roots ;)))))))))))))))))))).. read moreahhhhhhhh that would explain it then ... you haven't yet unshackled your roots ;))))))))))))))))))))) or ... maybe are still looking for them eh!? love the poem .. for all those reason above :)
4 Years Ago
Sometimes my brain just likes to pick words that rhyme
It is funny how certain tones and hues speak to us in warm and gentle tones, while others give our eyes a headache.
Purple, violet, lavender all have more gentle voices than those blues and lilacs neighbours, further down the the spectrum
I also love the sound of wind chimes too, but not here... It's so windy all you end up with is tinnitus. I'm pretty sure they are considered an offensive weapon here. 😀
Yet your words speak of gentle winds, caressing you from skin to soul.
Dulux would sell way more paint if they put words like this on the tins, instead of all those daft names they come up with.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Colors definitely can affect our mood. Purple is my favorite color. I love the darker blues hues of .. read moreColors definitely can affect our mood. Purple is my favorite color. I love the darker blues hues of purple the most. But the softer tones worked better for this poem
Purple is one of my favorite colors so I find it soothing and yet exciting and mysterious in feeling.. read morePurple is one of my favorite colors so I find it soothing and yet exciting and mysterious in feeling.
Wow, there is definite beauty in your words here and I absolutely fell in love with the title :) you start off strong, make your words sing to us, giving molecular fusion and taking us away, making us soar to someplace new. Your skills of imagery and flowing words together is wonderful. By the way, purple is my favorite color. I do love this piece and it really sang to my heart :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I like to take my poetry to different places and purple is my favorite color. I am glad you enjoyed.. read moreI like to take my poetry to different places and purple is my favorite color. I am glad you enjoyed reading this piece. I am pretty happy with the way it turned out.
a potpourri of emotions -- I quite like that. the floating effect is felt.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I am glad you liked that line. The last stanza I think is my favorite but I am happy with how this .. read moreI am glad you liked that line. The last stanza I think is my favorite but I am happy with how this piece turned out as a whole.
First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
Secondly be kind to each .. more..