Satire Innocence

Satire drips from silver tongues

Screaming about tornadic ideas

Flooding the already saturated air

A hurricane of anger

Envelopes the candles flame

Taring apart 

The rainbows hues

Scattering polka dots

Of delicate color

Splattering us with

Shattered innocence

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I love the use of words and description.
"A hurricane of anger
Envelopes the candles flame
Taring apart
The rainbows hues"
Sometime we turn to anger to find peace. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

The first time of this poem stuck in my mind for a few days and then the rest of it just kind of flowed from my brain.

[shallimarRose]

"Splattering us with
Shattered innocence" and we never get that innocence back.. Another great write.. so sR

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I like to write using all the senses and a bit abstract at times. You will find many different topics and tastes in my poetry.

[shallimarRose]

im the same way.. currently trying to get all the ducks in a row for publishing.. Glad to meet you..sR

[Frieda P]

Fickle fate play a role no doubt, not to mention outside stimuli we have no control over... 'taring apart the rainbow hues'....so true.

[Poetic Beauty]

Life is messy and unpredictable. We try to hide from the negative but that is a part of the experience and learning making us who we are.

[Frieda P]

Sure does, good, bad or indifferent....

[Ruth]

And everything once held dear is now in question...
Superb poem love xoxo

[Poetic Beauty]

Yep. Many times we hide from facts we don't want to see the facts that this world isn't what it once was.

[Rhianne Ney]

This is something that I've never thought that I'd stumble from, it was such a nice piece (:

~Keep writing~

[Poetic Beauty]

In my poetry I like to think outside the box. I think sometimes we are naive about what is happening on a grand scale and hide from it. Sometimes it takes someone opening our eyes to what is going on.

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right and everyone should really think outside the box to release something great (:

[zainul]

Images of geographical events mixed with amazing intellectual work have taken me to a
wonderful realization of reality.
Very well penned.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes we don't see the truth of what is going on in the big picture until we hear it in the headlines or someone brings our attention to it.

[zainul]

That's right,dear friend.
You have expressed the fact eloquently in your amazing piece :)

[Muse]

It's because of "out-side" forces beyond our control, that makes it hard to stay innocent. Like the weather, it is unpredictable. We wear our hearts on our sleaves some days...but we never expect the rain to come wash it away.

[Poetic Beauty]

You got the idea of this poem completely. Thank you for taking the time to read.

[Lily Mae]

At first in the beginning the words "some people just never know when to shut up" then you took it to a soft landing of truth..love and rainbows.. Excellent my friend..xo

[Poetic Beauty]

I didn't want this piece to be a negative one. Silver lining ya know smiles

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

such a wild feeling here and the image you chose fits the mood of the poem perfectly. Excellent!

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes it takes and outspoken person to get us to bring our head up out of the sand to see the sad truth

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I think this is good abstract writing, the walls, the floor, the whole environment, colourfully seems to speak out in vibrant shapes and patterns!

[Poetic Beauty]

Many of my poems are abstract but have a real meaning.

[Randolf Ramos]

i love the hidden meanings....

if only we are to be saturated with beauty of nature, then happiness is in full bloom.