Etched in Love

Etched in Love

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Etched in love
Engraved with passion
These words emboss
This paper with
The purest of emotions

Tattooing your name
Onto this fragile
Pulsing heart
With delectable 
Vibrant ink

Trickling through the soul
Spreading with ease
Filling the vacuum
With happiness and light
 Shining for the world
To openly see

© 2013 Poetic Beauty


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I like the short statements. Making your point and allowing the flow of thoughts to fall into the poetry. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"Tattooing your name
Onto this fragile
Pulsing heart
With delectable
Vibrant ink"
Real love leave permanent tattoos. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

Thank you.



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Absolutely, thoroughly, enjoyed this enchanting write; you captured so much with so few perfectly composed lines.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

I have a very romantic side that I don't show very often.
beautiful !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

This is how my guy makes me feel every day!! He is patient kind and supportive
I like your play with words and I especially enjoyed the final two stanzas

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

thank you
A very positive and inspiring poem filled with tender love and romance. Very beautiful words you use in this. Your skill shines brightly in this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I wrote this about how I feel about my guy
Very beautiful and filled with love. Thank you for bringing a little sunshine into this dreary day.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

My favorite thing to write about is love in all different abstract ways.
drawing out the emotion I like that, nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Etched is a beautiful word conveying deep love . Lovely write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

There are many different words that I like to use in my poetry because it gives you a good idea and .. read more
these quick to the point statements really got your feelings out that's a talent to show how you feel accurately with little effort

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

My muse is not a person but rather a voice within my own mind. It is the creative side of me. When.. read more
I like the short statements. Making your point and allowing the flow of thoughts to fall into the poetry. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"Tattooing your name
Onto this fragile
Pulsing heart
With delectable
Vibrant ink"
Real love leave permanent tattoos. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Beautifully etched words

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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