Vibrating Ecstasy

Ecstasy vibrates upon

The crimson satin hour

Feathery delights send chills

Down tingling vertebrae 

Capturing the soul in

A desirous spellbinding moment

As penetrable moments

Ring out gloriously 

Across the heated breeze

Scattering in all directions

Panting the explosion 

That leaves the body quivering

Pulsing emotions drenched

In an elation of sweat

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I wonder why the longing sensuality , lingering,
throbbing, surging renewed in all your creations ?
I wonder why you scatter the penetrable moments
across the heated breeze, scattering in all directions,
the panting explosions ?
I probably will never know what I am missing-----
but, I wonder.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Poetic Beauty]

This for me not only speaks of the physical unification but of the beauty of the moment and love that flows in each second.

[Dream Weaver]

Is there any other kind? Nicely done!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you Joe for reading.

[Dream Weaver]

You're welcome Kristina, maybe one day I could write such things as this ;)

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the way you write. Each of us has our own unique voice and that is what makes each of us special.

[Dream Weaver]

I reckon so.. :)

[luciddreamer]

Perfectly sensual...now excuse me while I take a cool shower :)...Peace, Love, and Light

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks. Its my first real piece at writing again in months

[Antonio Valentino]

ahh i hate it when my electric toothbrush falls into my lap BZZZzzzzzzZZZzzz haha

im sorry but that was just too naughty, im telling your mother

seriously.. it was sensual yet subtle, just the way i like it

wonderfully done

[Poetic Beauty]

Smiling and laughing. I have always been a little bit naughty. My guys tends to like it a lot lol

[Antonio Valentino]

only a little? sorry to hear that hahaah.. jus foolin about of course.. thanks for sharing

[Poetic Beauty]

I know. How are things going for you these days?

[Antonio Valentino]

all is right as i can expect, thank you for asking..

[Poetic Beauty]

That is good to hear. It is cold cold here right now. Gaw how I hate winter

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erotica well done! i especially like the absence of any pronoun

[Poetic Beauty]

I try not to use I, my, he or she unless absolutely needed.

[Avocations of Amber]

Very sensual and full of passion.....nicely written.... :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Passion to me is a full body experience mentally and physically.

[gombeggar]

an excitable story to be sure with lots of motion

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[gombeggar]

no problem...u r very welcome...keep writing

[Poetic Beauty]

I am trying to get back in the flow now that I have time to write again.

[gombeggar]

try and write every day even just a scribble to keep yerself in shape so to say with yer talents

[Poetic Beauty]

What a captivating moment, and almost film fragment you (indeed nail here) stunning... and perfection PB, this is a piece of artwork.
I've so missed reading you, when I was off...
Thank you for this write, I save it.

Eli

[Poetic Beauty]

i am glad you enjoyed this piece. It has been ages since I actually sat and wrote a heartfelt piece like this one. I have been really busy and haven't been on here much either.

Yes, and that is what breaks can do to a poet, being reborn with new words and perspectives, and heartfelt ones... I'm so glad you're back, we all need a breathe sometimes :) and real life is busy. So I perfectly feel you.

[Poetic Beauty]

I was working two jobs, trying to spend time with my son, trying to spend time with my guy, and my family for I am very close to my family and mix in the holidays and well you have overload and no time left. It feels good to only be working one job.

Yes, that's heavy to combine all, I'm the living example myself for that too, sometimes i drive myself crazy for all i do... I hope you will find some rest to breathe now and then :)

[Poetic Beauty]

It feels good to be able to breathe again.

[Distant horizons]

Yep, you naile this one too :-)
Isn't ecstasy just a perfect word. Perfectly describing itself with the way it sounds. I think your words here should appear under its dictionary definition :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I tend to gravitate toward sensual ideas.

[Distant horizons]

Well you certainly succeeded here :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Rob Santana]

What a smooth piece. I love your choice of words. I really like the last line.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I try to use all the senses and bring the reader completely in.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

every line made me want to go to this place........sensual, wonderful!

[Poetic Beauty]

It has been a really long time since I wrote a piece like this. Since prob. Sept or Oct. The words seemed to flow from my muses lips onto the paper.