I wonder why the longing sensuality , lingering,
throbbing, surging renewed in all your creations ?
I wonder why you scatter the penetrable moments
across the heated breeze, scattering in all directions,
the panting explosions ?
I probably will never know what I am missing-----
but, I wonder.
----- Eagle Cruagh
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
This for me not only speaks of the physical unification but of the beauty of the moment and love tha.. read moreThis for me not only speaks of the physical unification but of the beauty of the moment and love that flows in each second.
"The elation of sweat" speaks volumes to me and this piece sure got me going. It has been four years now and your work had my mind spinning. Well done and so sweetly penned.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Before I found the love of my life it had been four years for me as well but we all can relate to th.. read moreBefore I found the love of my life it had been four years for me as well but we all can relate to the need and feeling. I am glad you enjoyed this piece.
Naughty motives will leave the reader breathless. A sexy world you have created here.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Love is expressed in many ways. This is one of my favorite topics to write about. I am glad it lef.. read moreLove is expressed in many ways. This is one of my favorite topics to write about. I am glad it left you breathless.
I wonder why the longing sensuality , lingering,
throbbing, surging renewed in all your creations ?
I wonder why you scatter the penetrable moments
across the heated breeze, scattering in all directions,
the panting explosions ?
I probably will never know what I am missing-----
but, I wonder.
----- Eagle Cruagh
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
This for me not only speaks of the physical unification but of the beauty of the moment and love tha.. read moreThis for me not only speaks of the physical unification but of the beauty of the moment and love that flows in each second.
So much passion in three little verses. To express such desire and affection in so few amount of words is difficult, but you do it very well.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Sometimes for me less is more. It is about finding the right words and senses to use in the piece to.. read moreSometimes for me less is more. It is about finding the right words and senses to use in the piece to draw the reader in complete oh and color always helps for colors have emotional ties to them. Thank you so much for your kind review.
Photos and words were beautiful. Some visions in a life leave a permanent mark of beauty. The strong description allowed the reader to fall into the desire and ecstasy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote. There is much beauty and passion in life. We simply have to quit being distracte.. read moreThank you Coyote. There is much beauty and passion in life. We simply have to quit being distracted by chaos in life and learn to relax and enjoy the ride sometimes.
I try to write all different kinds of poetry but sensual and passionate pieces always seem to be in .. read moreI try to write all different kinds of poetry but sensual and passionate pieces always seem to be in the forefront
11 Years Ago
Well I liked it, Twice ;)
11 Years Ago
Thanks. I try to incorporate all the senses in my poetry so the reader can dance among the written .. read moreThanks. I try to incorporate all the senses in my poetry so the reader can dance among the written lines.
First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
Secondly be kind to each .. more..