Vibrating Ecstasy

Ecstasy vibrates upon

The crimson satin hour

Feathery delights send chills

Down tingling vertebrae 

Capturing the soul in

A desirous spellbinding moment

As penetrable moments

Ring out gloriously 

Across the heated breeze

Scattering in all directions

Panting the explosion 

That leaves the body quivering

Pulsing emotions drenched

In an elation of sweat

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I wonder why the longing sensuality , lingering,
throbbing, surging renewed in all your creations ?
I wonder why you scatter the penetrable moments
across the heated breeze, scattering in all directions,
the panting explosions ?
I probably will never know what I am missing-----
but, I wonder.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Poetic Beauty]

This for me not only speaks of the physical unification but of the beauty of the moment and love that flows in each second.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful erotic poem
It’s so clear and pure
It’s quite beautiful
I miss that feeling

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m fortunate that I get to experience this feeling from time to time

[Hello, Goodbye]

Delicacy by way of prose.

[Poetic Beauty]

A great way to explain this poem. Thank you for your kindness nd words

[Denise]

tingling vertebrae, I can feel your poem just by reading it and experience it for myself. My back just tingled ;)

[Poetic Beauty]

I try to incorporate many of the sense into my poetry to allow the reader to feel it.

[Veronica Chandler]

"The elation of sweat" speaks volumes to me and this piece sure got me going. It has been four years now and your work had my mind spinning. Well done and so sweetly penned.

[Poetic Beauty]

Before I found the love of my life it had been four years for me as well but we all can relate to the need and feeling. I am glad you enjoyed this piece.

[Satire69]

Naughty motives will leave the reader breathless. A sexy world you have created here.

[Poetic Beauty]

Love is expressed in many ways. This is one of my favorite topics to write about. I am glad it left you breathless.

[Satire69]

That it did!

[Jack...]

So much passion in three little verses. To express such desire and affection in so few amount of words is difficult, but you do it very well.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes for me less is more. It is about finding the right words and senses to use in the piece to draw the reader in complete oh and color always helps for colors have emotional ties to them. Thank you so much for your kind review.

[Ice QueenJen]

wow what a beautiful writing, and i see you haven't lost your touch for the subtle sexuality in your writing!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. This just kind of flowed

[Coyote Poetry]

Photos and words were beautiful. Some visions in a life leave a permanent mark of beauty. The strong description allowed the reader to fall into the desire and ecstasy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you Coyote. There is much beauty and passion in life. We simply have to quit being distracted by chaos in life and learn to relax and enjoy the ride sometimes.

[Jordan's Back]

Sexy and Very passionate. Loved it!

[Poetic Beauty]

I try to write all different kinds of poetry but sensual and passionate pieces always seem to be in the forefront

[Jordan's Back]

Well I liked it, Twice ;)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks. I try to incorporate all the senses in my poetry so the reader can dance among the written lines.