Unwriter's Block

Etched in suspended time

Emotions unravel knots

Leaking from an empty pen

Spiraling in cursive form

Cascading across the paper

With refined thought

Words dance across lines

Twirling with delight

Streaming with enthusiastic flare

Ink blots become defined

Sketched master pieces

Decorate thin parchment

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard when the mind is empty of thoughts and emotion. I use music and reading to try to open my mind to write.
"Words dance across lines
Twirling with delight
Streaming with enthusiastic flare"
Good when the pen come alive. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for taking the time to read. I was working too much and my mind just couldn't focus on writing for awhile.

[Sirius King]

Leaking from an empty pen

sounds like my brain at times lol

great write

[Poetic Beauty]

I think we all have those leaking from and empty pen kind of moments

[Sirius King]

yes,
it sucks lol

[Poetic Beauty]

I had writer's block for quite sometime. I was too too busy.

[Sirius King]

im sorta recovering from it myself lol

i actually wrote a poem on the subject, if you have time check it out

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/serenusaymone/1053070/

[Poetic Beauty]

I will have a look at it a little later on today.

[Sirius King]

ok kool

[Mauricio Montoya]

like this, it can go both ways i'm drawing right now and this one piece I'm doing fits this write.
nice work.

[Poetic Beauty]

I wish I could draw but God did not gift me with artist hands or an eloquent voice. lol I am glad this write connected with you.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes you can draw for its your words that place the image in my mind, poetry is Art

[Poetic Beauty]

I have the art of words you have both art of images and of words.

[luciddreamer]

You have described this release beautifully :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I like to write a bit abstract and involve all the senses

[Jordan's Back]

So is the soul of a Poet, Wonderful muse!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you

[Jordan's Back]

Always :)

[Lily Mae]

That first stanza resonates so well with me. Everything lately feels suspended in time and I don't have and ounce of control.. I am the empty pen... Excellent write..xo :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I think we all feel like empty pens sometimes

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When the creative dam opens up it takes a lot of pressure off the emotional walls. Good to see you writing again.

[Poetic Beauty]

Until recently i havent had time. Now i am only working one job

[KatDarkness]

Very elegant wording, which I enjoyed. Lines like "cascading across the paper" had a really lyrical sound to them. Very good poem :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I am a bit rusty. Haven't written anything for quite sometime