Autumn Sensations

It's a caramel latte afternoon

Drenched in gray clouds

And chilly sky drop dew

Mocha meditation simmers

Peculating the crisp pear air

As the pumpkin morning

Slowly falls into the distance

Melodies of the spiked apple cider evening

Dance upon the violet the tides

As romantic rose petals

Spring forth sparking fiery life

Autumn sensations spiral

Caressing the relaxed mind

Desirous notations 

Combust when they ignite 

 

Reviews

[AK]

Wow! Your writing is terrific:) I haven't said this in quite a while, but there is something about the way you write that makes me want to spew a hundred praises out and shower them at your feet. I really like the way you used beverages to describe the beautiful feeling of the autumn season:))
Keep writing!
*100*

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I like to write in a bit of an abstract way that adds all the senses in so that the reader can dance among the feeling and the setting of the piece. I write about many different things. We all have our own unique voice. Let yours shine.

[AK]

:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

divine are these coffee table scibings.....

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you

[Jibey]

Nice food imagery gives the feeling of the opulence and plenty of the harvest time

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the autumn season with all the color changes and spices in foods.

[Arielle Ann]

when I was reading it, I just imagined the rich sensation of creamy latte, caramel and mocha with the powerful imagery that you have so beautifully created in the lines that follow in the next stanzas.every image adds a vivid and colorful scene thats so apt for autumn!

[Pratik]

Wonderful imagery and rich words.. Your poem does justice to the beauty of the fall... the colors, fragrance and changes all brought alive through this wonderful poem ... Loved it :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you liked the fall imagery.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for Autumn. Good description of the cooler days of fall. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

I am finding love is quite colorful in the fall.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hey ~ :)
I want a coffee now - love that first line so much which sets the mood for the rest of Autumn's delights - great descriptions PB.... a beautiful poem with a spark of sensuality.

Chloe

(we also had a cold snap here in Arkansas )

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Hope all is well with you these days

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

You are welcome :) Things could be better and again ...lol
Take care !

[Poetic Beauty]

Well I do hope things clear up soon for you. YOu are welcome to stop by my page any time. Missed seeing you around here.

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Ditto PB, missed you and many others and thank you :)

[Tina Kline]

This really is full of the delights autumn has to offer. A very enjoyable poem. A delight for all the senses. I really enjoyed this.

[roarke]

Nice feel to this, the first two stanza's are picture perfect. I like the metaphor play between the words. then in the third stanza, things change, a drifting into another world, another perspective. It seems to fade away like the smoke from burning leaves. Smooth writing.

[Poetic Beauty]

It is always great to get a review from you

[Ruth]

You have captured all autumn is...this gives me a cosy feeling...

This is amazing! I adore it, a favourite...the first line literally pulls you into a land of enchantment ♥

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you Poppy. Love in the fall can be quite amazing!!

[Ruth]

Agree xoxo