Autumn Sensations

It's a caramel latte afternoon

Drenched in gray clouds

And chilly sky drop dew

Mocha meditation simmers

Peculating the crisp pear air

As the pumpkin morning

Slowly falls into the distance

Melodies of the spiked apple cider evening

Dance upon the violet the tides

As romantic rose petals

Spring forth sparking fiery life

Autumn sensations spiral

Caressing the relaxed mind

Desirous notations 

Combust when they ignite 

 

Reviews

[AK]

Wow! Your writing is terrific:) I haven't said this in quite a while, but there is something about the way you write that makes me want to spew a hundred praises out and shower them at your feet. I really like the way you used beverages to describe the beautiful feeling of the autumn season:))
Keep writing!
*100*

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I like to write in a bit of an abstract way that adds all the senses in so that the reader can dance among the feeling and the setting of the piece. I write about many different things. We all have our own unique voice. Let yours shine.

[AK]

:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

lovely, this makes me think of my coffee flavored with Caramel Macchiota?

[Poetic Beauty]

Caramel Macchiota is very good coffee.

[Deron Alexis]

this was inspirational i loved it totally the comparisons metaphors the emotions very well captured I live in the tropics so I know very little about autumn but i could feel it through your work well done

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Autumn is an amazing season filled with spice and color changing leaves. I am glad you could get feel for it through this piece.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

OMG, its so delicious , i really like it , well done :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I love to add color taste and smell into my poem so that the reader can step into the piece.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yes and you did it perfectly :)

[Distant horizons]

This is beautiful. Started making me really want a coffee, then danced into dusk with rhoughts of warming, sensuality. Perfectly paced, flows wonderfully

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to be abstract and surround the piece in decadence of sensations.

[Distant horizons]

You certainly reached your goal. decadence is a fitting description of the style used here. Rich and opulant :-)

[Sweet Emotions]

The imagery in this is beautiful! Autumn is my favorite season.

[Poetic Beauty]

The only season I don't enjoy is winter but it still has beauty.

[Mauricio Montoya]

this piece took me down memory lane when I was passing through Monterrey during the winter.
Nice work.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are always traveling somewhere. May you journeys be full filling.

[Mauricio Montoya]

thank you and may the new year bring you many blessing.

[Poetic Beauty]

The start to the new year is going well so far.

[Gabby Amaya]

Absolutely beautiful! I could picture every single detail :) It made me feel like i was surrounded by calm autumn hues just swirling all around me. :) Truly wonderful

[Rachel Fitzgerald-Feele..]

full of colour, texture, imagination and feeling...enticing!

[Muse]

caramel latte afternoon

Do you know how brilliant you just sounded? Put some whipped cream on that for me please..and I will drink it up and read you again! :D

[Poetic Beauty]

I love to use different foods and tastes in my poetry to allow the reader a full experience.

[Muse]

and it was so very mmm mmm good. :))