Autumn Sensations

It's a caramel latte afternoon

Drenched in gray clouds

And chilly sky drop dew

Mocha meditation simmers

Peculating the crisp pear air

As the pumpkin morning

Slowly falls into the distance

Melodies of the spiked apple cider evening

Dance upon the violet the tides

As romantic rose petals

Spring forth sparking fiery life

Autumn sensations spiral

Caressing the relaxed mind

Desirous notations 

Combust when they ignite 

 

Reviews

[AK]

Wow! Your writing is terrific:) I haven't said this in quite a while, but there is something about the way you write that makes me want to spew a hundred praises out and shower them at your feet. I really like the way you used beverages to describe the beautiful feeling of the autumn season:))
Keep writing!
*100*

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I like to write in a bit of an abstract way that adds all the senses in so that the reader can dance among the feeling and the setting of the piece. I write about many different things. We all have our own unique voice. Let yours shine.

[AK]

:)

[Relic]

This sounds like something that was written on or for a Sunday. There is such a sublime and peaceful feel to this. This is real top-notch writing. Excellent job.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the autumn season with all its unique smells, spices and color changing trees.

[Relic]

It's my favorite time.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love spring when the flowers start to sprout up and I can get outside and start digging in the dirt and start planting new ones.

[KAREN]

The imagery in this piece lit up the page! Painted a beautiful picture, reading this I saw it all!

[Poetic Beauty]

glad you picked up on the sensual side of this piece.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this! Great imagery that just pops!

[Poetic Beauty]

autumn spills spice and serenity

[Whiskurz]

The imagery jumps off the page....Quite a word painting my friend.....Whisk

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I try to make the imagery strong and jump off the page evoking all the senses

[Una Xoto]

You really capture the spirit of a season near and dear to my heart. I love the imagery here

[Poetic Beauty]

the fall has so many unique qualities to it.

[Una Xoto]

it really does. It is ripe with color, smell, symbol & spirit. I love the ancient mythology tied to Autumn... Always glad to read a great write surrounding her.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Now that's what i am talking about!
some serious imaginary!
Although i dont walk down that path - style - but i respect it

[Poetic Beauty]

I write in many different ways but love to bring out all the sensations so that the reader can feel as if they are walking with the words themselves

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

And you're doing great so far, - gonna read more -

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I admit it, I write poems sometimes at starbucks in Autumn like this one! Sweet write, easy on the eyes.

[Poetic Beauty]

I have a favorite little coffee shop where I live but I havent written in there before. Umm maybe one day.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I have quite a few favorites, writing is solitary enough, no point to write in physical solitude.

[Poetic Beauty]

It depends on my mind frame.

[MOON]

Autumn rich colours reds and oranges and a bit of chill . Captured beautifully.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for reading.

[Poetic Beauty]

So many colored flavours, so many hues,
I did loved the close being in this write
To each little detail PB, you're a wonder with words.

So so beautiful.

E.L.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I tend to use color and tastes in my poem to capture a full experience.

That's utterly high sensitive my friend, love it.... :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Great choice of words that tingle the eardrums and excite the senses:)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. There are many great sensations and smells during Autumn.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I dont know what autum is...buyt i have seen the pictures and heard about it....we just have 3 seasons where i live in Goa...rains, heat and cold.

[Poetic Beauty]

Autumn is great. The leaves change color, it is cooler outside between 40 - 50 degrees ferh. It is a time for bonfires, and apple cider. There are many food changes like pumpkin is used in breads and pies, apples are in season as well as pears. Cinnamon, nutmeg, and hazelnut spices are used a lot for they are warmer. People start drinking hot coco and we have the start of American football and the end of the baseball season.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

wow...thats a poem in its own write....is your reply! thx. i love cinnamon tea...dunno what the othe spices are...will chk my lexicon...40-50 deg fah might be something like our december cold i guess...like 22 deg celsius or less..bon fires are always welcome even in summer lol...it gives us an excuse to sing songs and roast cashewnuts...apple-cider must be wine of sorts...sory its so diff ur world n mine...pumkin we have...yeh like ur haloween orange pumkins they r rarely grown in fields now./...but on rooftops...hot coco anyday...and baseball must be somethin like what i was talkin about here :) hello friend how are you cheers from the land of the football http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_26tdj0GzQU

[Poetic Beauty]

we do have apple cider wine but apple cider is actually made just from apple juice with clove, cinnamon and nutmeg in it and sugar. You drink it warm. 22 deg cel is close to 40 - 50 deg ferh. Our winters are colder than that. It is only 20 deg ferh right now and gets even colder at night.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

brrrr........now that explains furcoats and hearths in the hall...:)
thank you for the info...will catch u often