Silvery Moment

Beneath the violet sky

Where silver moonbeams

Touch the shaded ground

You lay silently dreaming

Off on an adventure

To those mystic shores

Where all things are possible

Your body silhouetted

In the silvery blue glow

Eyes relaxed and closed

Breathing steady and slow

And I think of how

I love you so

There is magic swirling

Underneath the stars

As ardent emotions

Begin to flow through

The velvety night

Entrancing the moment

With unconsummated ecstasy 

A moment of visual calm

Creating euphoric delight

 

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This one sounded slightly contrived with a predictable flow....and what is wrong with that? Nothing at all, just that I have preferred many your other poems, personally, because they tend to really suprise my senses and stimulate memories and emotions...this is not to say I'm not impressed or dissapointed, just less engaged, that all, thanks.

[Poetic Beauty]

My poems vary in style and flare if you will. I have some that are my favorites while other I still like. I understand what you are saying.

[MoriartyMesa]

Call me a bit ole fashion, but there is some Rock N Roll to these words and I think they rock.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. This is a moment that I wrote about real in my life.

[Rachel Fitzgerald-Feele..]

a very vivid yet intense description especially within the last verse. enjoyed reading

[Poetic Beauty]

Night time with its romance and mystery, is my favorite time of day.

[Jibey]

Words of romantic passion

[Poetic Beauty]

I have a lot of romantic passion these days. I simply haven't had time to write lately.

[Larry Dyson]

You are one Estatic Lady right now...I just beam at the opportunity you have with Him..it inspires all you write..congradts.Friend Lady..Laury

[Poetic Beauty]

He makes me happy. I love him. thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description allowed reader to feel the desire and location in the poem. Strong description gave life to your words. I like the complete poem. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for taking the time to read.

[Tina Kline]

Rather soothing and deeply romantic. I love the scene your words paint. Fabulous poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. This one is soothing and tranquil.

[Layla J Omorose]

Beautifully written. I enjoyed your use of color font, it helped set the tone of the poem and added to it visually. I agree that this poem is very mysterious and very beautiful. Good work. I would just suggest putting some commas in so slow the rhythm down. With out them the poem reads as one long line. A pause here and there would be good. But good work.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I love to add colors into my pieces. I think it helps set the mood and idea. Night time is my favorite time to write about. It is romantic and mysterious.

[Pax Analog]

Rich atmospheric prelude to full erotic engagement, spiritually sound in its already euphoric sense of "unconsummated ecstasy." The reader looks forward to the silvery blue glow's incandescence into hues of mauve & scarlet in the next stage of romantic rapture. . .;-)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you picked up on the smaller but important details of this piece.

[the_stoic]

rich with imagery, the blue hue of the words enhance the visual appeal ! thanks for sharing :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I love to use violet silver and blues for shading in my poetry.