Body Heat

Your intoxicating body heat

Wraps around me

With effervescence warmth

That soothes the soul

Quieting the mind

A gentle leg

Draped over mine

Snuggling in an 

Incoherent embrace

As warm breath

Begins to rise and fall

I surrender to

The tranquil comfort

Of internal need

As my eyes close 

Softly falling asleep

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Loved the playful cliffhanger dear... you build it so nice up, then, all is there is true beauty for the intellectual, amazing stuff, and great imagery, true your quill, I truly enjoyed this piece. Romantic, confident, loveable, trustful, all what a real lover should breath within rise and falls... lovely work.

E.L.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is our private moment, our quiet moment at night. We talk a little then he falls asleep and listen to his breath rise and fall and feel consumed and comforted by his nearness.

I felt that... and it's the best thing to have between you two. Lovely. Pure, amazing.

[KAREN]

Beautiful expressions of love!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. He is a beautiful soul to me

[melissa]

very nice:)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Lovely. It ebbs and flows in a steadily provocative rhythm. Nice job.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I wrote this after snuggling up with my guy at night as we fall alseep

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Lovers are such inspiration, aren't they?

[Poetic Beauty]

very much so

[Jibey]

Those moments of physical comfort are very special... I loved the 'incoherent embrace'... Emotionally satisfying, warm and sweetly arousing

[Poetic Beauty]

This can be perceived in many ways but for me this is about him falling asleep and just him surround me with his presences makes me feel comfort and allows my mind to be silent.

[Lily Mae]

You have a different flare to your new work.. I'm not sure if it has to do with someone special but it's all good... your all sexy and all woman.. :) xo

[Poetic Beauty]

This piece is about curling up next to him at night and listening to him fall asleep as his body heat surrounds me, comforting me slowly lulling me to sleep.

[Sirius King]

very hot, and intimate...nice

[Poetic Beauty]

This can be sensual but for me it is all about snuggling up to the person who means the world to me.