Body Heat

Your intoxicating body heat

Wraps around me

With effervescence warmth

That soothes the soul

Quieting the mind

A gentle leg

Draped over mine

Snuggling in an 

Incoherent embrace

As warm breath

Begins to rise and fall

I surrender to

The tranquil comfort

Of internal need

As my eyes close 

Softly falling asleep

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Loved the playful cliffhanger dear... you build it so nice up, then, all is there is true beauty for the intellectual, amazing stuff, and great imagery, true your quill, I truly enjoyed this piece. Romantic, confident, loveable, trustful, all what a real lover should breath within rise and falls... lovely work.

E.L.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is our private moment, our quiet moment at night. We talk a little then he falls asleep and listen to his breath rise and fall and feel consumed and comforted by his nearness.

I felt that... and it's the best thing to have between you two. Lovely. Pure, amazing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and passionate poem. Good to feel safe and comfort with another. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

I couldn't agree more. I feel this way each night when I crawl underneath the covers wrapped in his soothing body heat.

[Bare Trees]

Beautifully done. There's nothing like body heat to put you at ease and give comfort. I'm sure this was taken from a night/nights that meant a lot to you and your significant other and continues to do so. Nice writing.

Pendragon

[Poetic Beauty]

It is and his body heat does relax me and put me at ease

[Bare Trees]

:)

[Larry Dyson]

wonderful soul joining!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you my dear friend.

[Colleen a Bean]

wow I love this

[Poetic Beauty]

I do this with my guy every night. He soothes me and quiets the chaos withing my world.

[Colleen a Bean]

awh I had a guy like that now were just really close friends

[Poetic Beauty]

I have been in love like this before and it ended. This time it feels different more controlled.

[Colleen a Bean]

ya I guess I can't seem to get over my guy he was my first love and first kiss I just can't stop loving him

[Poetic Beauty]

It took me four long years before I knew I could move on and be in a relationship where I could put 100 percent into it.

[Colleen a Bean]

ya I hope i can move on soon

[Poetic Beauty]

It takes time and don't rush it. Let the emotions flow out of you.

[Colleen a Bean]

I will try :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Didnt exactly hit the spot for me to be honest, but I did enjoy it and sense the passion and love within the poem. Nicely done!

[Poetic Beauty]

Everyone sees poetry differently and takes something different from it. I have had a few poems that just were my cup of tea either. Thank you for posting what you did like about it.

[Tina Kline]

Wow, I like this. Romantic, comforting and peaceful. A perfect moment for lovers.

[Poetic Beauty]

It is one of those quiet private moments

[quinfinn]

best rendering of the "afterglow" i have ever read...sensual and gentle

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for reading. It is a great feeling.

[quinfinn]

yes, it is...welcome

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The heat of love is an eternal flame that will burn forever... such a beautiful little poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. He is a very sweet person. Sighs

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

What a wonderful beautiful way to drift off to sleep!

[Poetic Beauty]

I do this every night.