Momentum of Night

Circular Momentum 

Wrapped in the hush

Of feathered onyx wings

Glittered with silver orbs

As velvet silence closes in

Nocturnal calling

Of the cosmos echoes

Sending peaceful waves

Across the ether

Thundering with 

Raindrops of tranquility 

Invisible strings

Of intertwining

Connections

Lace between

Silken nurtured folds

Vastness of mystery

Spiraling in all directions

Creating momentary bliss

 

Reviews

[Jibey]

A lovely write, with you trademark linking of music of the spheres with the emotional connections of two souls that connect and fuse... the paradox of the thundering rains of tranquillity is suggestive of the satisfaction of passion...the silken folds of the beauty of love-making

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I love to get abstract so you can dance within the piece

[Kenneth The Poet]

Perfect read at 1am...with Echo and Bunnymen in the background.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Lovely! Once again, your language is mesmerizing. You have a gift for choosing words and using them effectively. *thumbs up*

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I use the thesaurus a lot and it has increased my vocabulary. I try to use unique words to get the idea across clearly

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I love my thesaurus

[Jeremy Baker]

You are a herald for the magic of the night - I really enjoyed this piece!

[Poetic Beauty]

I believe and feel night time is full of magic romance and wonder

[Tina Kline]

Very grand, unique and beautiful. I really love the visuals in this, I can believe in the bliss by the time I reach the end. Fabulous work!

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the feel of this piece and glad you did too

[The Analog Kid]

I always visualize your writing as a paint brush or a scene that's developing from stanza to stanza. Night is where we poets often dwell as you know...

[Poetic Beauty]

I try to incorporate many different senses into my poetry

[The Analog Kid]

Well done:)

[Lily Mae]

I agree with Cowboy..there's magic in the night.. a mystery.. It symbols a time of freedom to be.. for me I guess.. xo Love it.. as always..

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Night time is mt favorite

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Night does have a certain mystique that can create magic... another lovely piece of writing.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the night time and all its wonder that it holds. I always have been drawn to the midnight hour so to speak.