Silky Shades of Night

The silky shades

Of night are whispering

Calling out your name

Brushing my ears

With a decadent desire

To close the distance

On a once caged heart

 

Secret melodies springing

Forth a new life

Of strawberry moments

Spent under the mystical

Observant stars

As arms wrap around

My fast beating hear

 

Enriched with glorious

Contentment

The soars among

All knowing cosmos

Penetrating through

The onyx abyss

 

Surging spectacularly

With profound feeling

The sing with a choirs

Melody.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

one thing that really stands out when I read your poetry (stands out in my mind) is that you weave in words like chocolate, strawberry (food) you weave food words into your poetry beautifully. I personally like to weave nature into mine. I suppose one could say that is party of your signature, your originality and it works wonderfully!

[Tina Kline]

A very skillfully created poem full of wonderful words of imagery. The emotions expressed here come through to the reader, drawing them into your poem. A wonderful experience.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank toi for reading i love the feel in this poem

[Dark Poetry]

A mysterious poem, nice job.

[Layla J Omorose]

You are very good with your use of words and imagery. I felt this poem had a real dreamy feel to it. As if the speaker was floating through a dream of the affection he/she feels for the subject of the poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you

[Jibey]

This creation of words with their emotion charged images is like a wonderful meal...with stellar dimensions - the strawberry moments and the surge of the music of the stars... so stirring...

[Poetic Beauty]

I have some new inspiration for this piece

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This is really vivid in emotional expression! Very nice poetic cascade :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad my emotions were vivid

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I enjoyed this!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks for taking the time to.read and I am glad you enjoyed.it

[Serenity Faith]

A little proofreading and this will be superb ^_^ It's a very elegant piece. You've dressed the night like a queen. Absolutely beautiful.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you very much will.fix.typos tomorrow

[Poetic Beauty]

Stupid phone Sry about the extra periods

[Serenity Faith]

lol been there done that xD

[Poetic Beauty]

Can't fix typos from it either

[Anthem]

I like the way you used the stars as "observant," like you were the only two people on Earth as lovers. Just a couple of typos in there but still 100/100 for my bud:)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank.you. I will.find the typos

[Anthem]

Sure:)