Nocturnal Feathers

Silver spheres dance

On the opulent horizon

Glistening with notions

Of ambiguous dreams 

Nourishing amorous

thoughts

Detours in the heart

Gleams setting sail

On moonbeam desires

 Detonating bombs

Penetrate stone walls

That protect the heart

From crude invasion 

Sparking fiery delight

On nocturnal feathers 

Emotions soar to

Outstanding heights

Flying with consuming

Pleasure

Reviews

[cevance]

Just one word is needed. Excellent!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is one of my favorite poems that I have written.

[the_stoic]

You weave an imagery so rich with your words .. I was forced to shut off for a minute and just imagine .. powerful write !

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the mystery and wonder that the night time can bring

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Great imagery. I felt the immediacy of the poem build up towards the end, adding a sense of excitement to the piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing artwork and poetry. I like the vision create by strong statements. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. I like the feel of darkness and mystery in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you very much I love the night and all it has to offer

[Colleen a Bean]

very poetic I like this poem alot and I really like how the Imagery you used decribes everything so beautifully that I can see it in my head great write I can't wait to read more of your writing :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the night amd all that it has to offer. The hours for lover draped beneath the velvet silk. Thank you kindly

[Colleen a Bean]

I love the night also so this poem spoke to me haha

[Jibey]

A poem of dreams and longed for emotions...kept out by the stone walls untilthey are blasted aside to let the feelings soar... amorous desires... wishing for heavenly consummation

[Poetic Beauty]

You have hit all the.points in this.poem except the last. It is more about simply being in that person's presence and maybe a hug

[Poetic Beauty]

Mysterious occult, yet so warm... and a wonderful metaphor so it looks for me like a dance fertilization, interesting indeed... Beautiful work

E.L.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks. Everyone is coming up with third own ideas on this piece. It is amazing to see all the unique ideas

That's the beauty of the written word(s)

[Poetic Beauty]

It truly is

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Interesting. I like it!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I.post below to rocking roll.cowboy the deeper.meaning of this piece

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Yeah I read it. I really like this you are an excellent writer.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for the.wonderful compliment. My.poetry has evolved.over time. I am still.a.work.in progress. Most.of.my.poems.are.written with some one in mind just.depends on the pie e

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Yeah I tend to do that too.,

[Poetic Beauty]

My Muse.lives in the creative.part.of my mind.and screams.at me about what to.write

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Same except so.betimes it's a quite whisper for me so I have to really listen hard to hear what it's saying

[Poetic Beauty]

Mind.wakes me up at night. I am.wake up with a thought that has to be pit on paper

[Poetic Beauty]

Mine

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

I know how that is.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Rise above the hate and fly where only love can touch you... a really uplifting poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

Love is a wonderful emotion even if you can't be with that person. Embrace it for what.it is enjoy the fact you can love amd accept.the reality that it may never happen in this lifetime. That is the deeper meaning in this piece. Love in the cosmos.

[Tina Kline]

This is one amazing poem. There is something beautiful about the night despite how scary it can be at times. A really outstanding poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

I have always loved night and can rememberas a small child staring out the window of the car looking at the moon

[Tina Kline]

Yes, the moon is very beautiful and mysterious. I did that too.