I don't wanna be me

I don't wanna be me

A Poem by Akira
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i am tried of bein akira i wanna be sum 1 else

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I don't wanna be me

I wanna be someone else

Someone better then wat i am

Someone better that wat i become

Someone i look up to and everything else

That's why i don't wanna be myself

© 2008 Akira


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Akira
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i'm shocked right now. your writes are good and they are also kinda off on writing but in this cased right now its going good though.

in the end of your poem wasn't good enough for to understand
and you wasn't suppost to say, That's why i don't wanna be myself
and make it seem so real
but other then that everything was good to me and nice work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i'm shocked right now. your writes are good and they are also kinda off on writing but in this cased right now its going good though.

in the end of your poem wasn't good enough for to understand
and you wasn't suppost to say, That's why i don't wanna be myself
and make it seem so real
but other then that everything was good to me and nice work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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