Fobiden Love

I feel that i can't love but i do and it is so confusing i can't take it. I am writting this because i feel something about this person.

I love you

I truley do

But i can't feel for you

You are on my mind

all the time

I  want you deeply

I know u want me to

I can't explain my love for you

But no one must know what i say

Today or anyother day

We can't talk or even say hey

that is why are love is

Forbiden

Reviews

[Michael]

Hi Akira,

You have an honest feel to your expression, that is very important for a poet. Over time that will develop into your "style." of writing. You do need to pay attention to details as get in the way for the reader. You have a few spelling mistakes and the wrong word (are = our) selected near the end.

Please accept this as constructive, you really have shown talent here. I have been at this for over 30 years now and still need the help of others looking over my shoulder.

Keep writing! The world needs more poets.