Chill

Chill

A Poem by Akira
"

just calim the heck down

"

Why is that her would to that

Hit me, slap me, stuff like that

I do everything and what do i deserve

everything i want in the world

I treat you with respect and you show none

Being with you isn't fun

You make feel weak and ill

Sometimes i don't know what i feel

Sometimes i really wish you would chill!!!!!!

 

© 2008 Akira


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Why is that her would to that...
Not sure what this line was suppose to be, might want to read it over.


You make feel weak and ill

Sometimes i don't know what i feel

Sometimes i really wish you would chill!!!!!!

I really liked these last few lines.
Good write ; )

Posted 16 Years Ago



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