You Are

You Are

A Poem by Akira
"

it's about love

"

You are everthing to me

Can't you see?

You are mine all mine

I think about you all the time

You are the only thing on my mind

Because it's really plain to see

You are everything to me

© 2008 Akira


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Very simple and to the point as well as something easy to relate. A wonderful little quick read. A main improvement I can see is possibly adding in another line after the fifth to keep the 2 line rhyme's consistent.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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