Jellyfish

Jellyfish

A Poem by poetic-raven2012

Pink is a term not always reserved
for happy. Tentacles swish delicately in
the soothing cold water, waiting for
their chance to snap and wrap boldly around
warm skin, causing pain and discomfort. They like
the water to themselves, with no slight disturbances. They
give no warnings, no second tries, only second burns you
probably wouldn't want.
Jellyfish on a flesh hunt gleam in the moonlight,
daring lovers to come for a swim,
daring children to sneak from their beach houses.
They taunt with horrible intentions; the torturers
demanding submission, allowing no room for failure or
you risk the sting of the happy looking tentacles.
The pink jellyfish prep is a closet sadist.

© 2009 poetic-raven2012


Author's Note

poetic-raven2012
My best friend and I were having a propmt war...AKA asking each other to write very strange things, and the one who decides it's unwrite-able loses. This prompt was to write about jellyfish, using the words lovers, prep, saidst, torturer, pink, failure and delicate.

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You did a very good job espiaclly for such a diffcult prompt. I really like this unusal pieace.


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Hiya. I'm Jenn, I'm fifteen. I have the five most amazing best friends in the world. ♥ I spend as much time as possible with them as possible. I hate being home; my mom and I constantly fight. .. more..

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A Poem by poetic-raven2012