Do What You Will
A Poem by poetic-raven2012
Take me to the end of the world
In your boat on salty rivers of sadness.
Rip me piecewise 'til I'm all done.
Never give a word,
My opinion doesn't matter,
I defer my life, my will, my existance,
To this whim of yours,
Never mind my pain.
Ignore my red-veined eyes
And blackened soul.
Do what you will, my dear,
Just let me sit along in the canoe with you,
We'll travel the world in my tears.
What a horrid price to pay
For a little sightseeing.
© 2009 poetic-raven2012
Author's Note
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This was written back in early April sometime, at around four in the morning; I couldn't sleep.
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God how lovely this is ,so poetic,just like your name..
Take me to end of your world,in your boat,on rivers of sadness
Rip me to pieces till I am done,wont say a word,for i am all yours
My word dont matter ,dont count,I toss my life ,my will,to your whims
Never mind my pain if its your joy,do what you will ,oh dear..
just let me sit along with you in your canoe,i will see the world
I will see the world with you through tears,still what joy I feel
Ohh how wonderful love could be,do whatever you like with me
lovely write..
Posted 15 Years Ago
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poetic-raven2012Baltimore, MD
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Hiya. I'm Jenn, I'm fifteen. I have the five most amazing best friends in the world. ♥ I spend as much time as possible with them as possible. I hate being home; my mom and I constantly fight.
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