Writing:Me::Breathing:You

So you tell me I write too much?
Don't lie to me,
I heard you,
We were on the phone, just a minute ago.
Well, here I am writing about how you think I write too much.
Irony, ain't it?
I could go off about everything you do too much,
But that would make me just plain mean.
Maybe I should though, just to make my point.
I'll do it in private later.
Maybe my writing is like your breathing.
It is just as much a reflex and a second nature
As one to you, and the other to me.
Friend of mine,
Maybe you should breathe less.

Author's Note

New rewrite to an old peice. Circa 2007?

Reviews

[Legion]

That is a tough retort. :) Yea, let 'em try it. Well done.