Blue Fire

Blue Fire

A Poem by poetic-raven2012

With fire I burn you,
Blue flames so strong,
Little old me again,
Cold set fiery eyes.
Perfection in movements,
I never miss a step.
Don't make me angry,
I won't hesitate to hurt you.
Unmarred pale skin
In contrast with the inside,
I want somebody to love me.

© 2009 poetic-raven2012


Author's Note

poetic-raven2012
My teacher enjoys making us "be someone else" (quite literally) in our writing assignments. She told us to be someone from a cartoon series; I ended up being Azula from Avatar.

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This is awesome. It captures Azula well. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was awesome. You characterize Azula very well. Your imagery is brilliant. I love it.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 20, 2009

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Hiya. I'm Jenn, I'm fifteen. I have the five most amazing best friends in the world. ♥ I spend as much time as possible with them as possible. I hate being home; my mom and I constantly fight. .. more..

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A Poem by poetic-raven2012