Trust

Trust

A Poem by poetic-raven2012

I would do anything to see
one of those soul flashing smiles.
You and I both know it,
I wish you would
see me for who I am
and not others perceptions of me,
because three years is long enough
to decide if I'm worthy of being trusted.
Don't look past me
when I'm right in front of you.
Learn to trust me
if only for how hard I fought to
be able to finally trust you, with
no trust coming from you.
I know you know I'm here,
you've heard me ask you what it takes
for you to trust someone.
I know there is hardship in your past.
Let me hep you through it,
but only when you're ready.
If anything know that
even though I am hurting
because you still think I am
untrustworthy, I will
be here for you no matter what pain
you have put me through,
in the all revealing end when
you decide I am
worthy of your trust
and smile.

© 2009 poetic-raven2012


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Your strength really shows in this write. Thanks for sharing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem seems like it would work better if it was broken up into stanzas of some sort. But I like the effect it gives off right now just as much. Keep writing,

Kyler

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 15, 2009

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Hiya. I'm Jenn, I'm fifteen. I have the five most amazing best friends in the world. ♥ I spend as much time as possible with them as possible. I hate being home; my mom and I constantly fight. .. more..

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A Poem by poetic-raven2012