I miss you

I miss you

A Poem by poetdweller


I miss you


Your touch


Your hold


Your hug


I miss you



I miss you


I miss your deep brown eyes


Your tall thin frame


Long dark hair


Your very soul


Yes, I miss you



I miss you


not how I miss pizza


Not how I miss Harry Potter


But how I miss my


Tall amazing love


Who means most the world to me


Can you see the hurt missing you brings?



I miss you


Your jokes


Your humor


Your stories


Going anywhere with me


Sacrificing things for me


I miss you



I miss you


Because now you are gone


A state away


Without an intelligence to contact me


More than an amount not okay


Yes,


I miss you



I miss you


All about you


Because you seem


To complete me


And make my joy full.


So, yes, its true.


I love you, which is


The sword, to which


I miss you.


 


© 2009 poetdweller


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I love the simplicity of this write...yet so profound and tender. Nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's a simple list of what you miss, and I think it could speak to the heart of many a person. Nice job hun.

Posted 14 Years Ago


hmmm....i like how you direct your reader to who you miss, but not in the way of getting to know that person but getting to know there character, there moves. I love you line about intelligence to call, awsome...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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