Give up

 

Look what I’ve done

Look at me now

 

Shattered dreams

Corrupted reality

Broken life

To tired to continue

Hurting

Falling into pain

 

What did I do?

Why do I feel this way?

 

Burning from their eyes

Piercing stares

Cruel sick laughs

Bumped,

Tripped,

Alone…

 

What can I do now?

I’m stuck

 

Try

They laugh

Try

They push and laugh harder

I fall, and get back up

They push again

I fall, even more bruised than before.

 

What Can I do now?

Give up

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Mmmm. it did not end with a question mark so it seems they have decided their fate in the face of adversity. Unfortunate feelings we can all relate to at one point or another - I know that I can certainly empathize but I try not to give up anyway. Thank you. Well penned, thoughful work.
Light,
Siddartha

[Adventerous Amy]

well thats how i fell............everyday!
:-((((((((((

[Tai Chi Italy]

I assume this is an ironic piece Poetdweller? Of course all there is to do is, try and try and try again, it is character building and gets us where we are going, to the end. One typo. 'too tired' a bit like Tai right now. I look forward to more of your offerings