Interesting concept! I've never considered someone being addicted to spirituality, but I feel like it definitely exists in the world.
The writing feels a little bit casual, kind of "throwaway," and I think it may benefit from more concise, more deliberate word choice. But I like it!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Justin. I thought to myself...I wonder if I could compare meditating to meth addiction. A.. read moreThank you, Justin. I thought to myself...I wonder if I could compare meditating to meth addiction. And bam, here is the result. It is meant to be kinda aloof, absurd, comedic. Hence, the casual feel. Thank you again, I appreciate you reading and commenting.
Interesting concept! I've never considered someone being addicted to spirituality, but I feel like it definitely exists in the world.
The writing feels a little bit casual, kind of "throwaway," and I think it may benefit from more concise, more deliberate word choice. But I like it!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Justin. I thought to myself...I wonder if I could compare meditating to meth addiction. A.. read moreThank you, Justin. I thought to myself...I wonder if I could compare meditating to meth addiction. And bam, here is the result. It is meant to be kinda aloof, absurd, comedic. Hence, the casual feel. Thank you again, I appreciate you reading and commenting.
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