Drugs and UNholy Matrimony

I used to be heavily addicted to drugs and now im quitting. This is my poem. This is what I have to say. The cold hard truth. Drugs and UNholy Matrimony. Enjoy.

The needles,

The pills,

All of its real,

As though I could feel,

The drip of it still,

The numbness that travels,

as I give into will,

So I cant feel.

 

To take these drugs,

To hang with thugs,

To do these things,

And keep my mind bugged....

 

These drugs they take,

everything from me,

my mind,

my soul,

my very heartbeat,

every time i use,

I get abused,

by the drug I took,

for another look,

I feel numb,

I feel strange,

I feel in every way deranged,

I can do everything,

I cant do anything,

Im invincible,

Im weak,

And all I do is seek,

That new high,

To get by,

To stay fly,

I cant think,

I must drink,

I must pop,

They must drop,

Down my throat,

I cant choke,

its as though,

I have lost my mind,

and I cant find,

My way back home,

It must be so,

Im gone,

Im strung,

I cant get back,

Every thing I do,

Is it all an act?

I want the drugs,

I wanna be strung,

I kick it with thugs,

just to feel loved,

But im always numb,

And I cant feel a thing,

Everything I do I cant really see,

I need to use,

I feel abused,

A non talking pill,

lights a fuse,

They are not human,

They cannot chat,

All they do,

Is make your body react.

 

Cold chills they run,

Down my spine,

As the pills I took,

I slowly find,

Dont last long,

Your only a moment sprung,

I cant get off,

This mental song,

The cold,

The hot,

Its all non stop,

Come Downs,

Come ups,

It will all be bust,

its all these drugs,

Keeping me numb,

I hate it,

I love it,

I need it,

But f**k it,

Not a victim no more,

I need to come above it.

Author's Note

review with the truth plz(:

Reviews

[victoria]

wow i loved this. it was really strong and i love how u made all the lines short, it really added to the poem. the flow was pretty good too :D the only thing i would change is all the punctuation, u can take out all the commas cuz there really not needed. a few periods is all u really need lol. but other than that, great write :D

[MusicMartyrs]

wow its so raw and powerful. and good that you are overcoming the addiction. it'll be hard but i have no doubt you can do it :)
100/100