Please Tell Me

I just decided to write this for no reason but it ended out good I think(:

Please tell me,

Please tell me,

Why im so lost,

 

Please tell me,

please tell me,

your all that I got,

 

Please tell me,

Please tell me,

whats on your mind,

 

Please tell me,

Please tell me,

whats in your eyes,

 

Please tell me,

Please tell me,

its love and not hate,

 

Please tell me,

Please tell me,

that im not insane,

 

please tell me,

please tell me,

you didnt cut your vein,

 

please tell me,

please tell me,

I wont lose you again,

 

Please tell me,

please tell me,

I do not give you shame,

 

Please tell me,

please tell me,

that I love you not in vain,

 

Please tell me,

please tell me,

what do you gain?

 

Please tell me,

please tell me,

this is not a lie,

 

Please tell me,

please tell me,

that youll be there for life,

 

I told you,

I told you,

I love you forever,

 

And I told you

and told you,

you make everything better.

 

 

Reviews

[Zach]

Thank you that makes me feel great/

[Emily Paige]

I love this it made me cry very few things can make me cry great job.

[Zach]

thanks (:

[Elizabeth]

The repetition works really well. Sometimes repetition can really backfire, but in this case it gave the piece a continuity. Well done!

[MusicMartyrs]

it starts out sad but ends really sweet :D