In Intimate Dance~

love

 

 

We fit
like pieces to a puzzle;

senses intermingle

~in intimate dance~
while breezes carry whispers
blushing dream

from fluttering lashes
to open arms-

two silhouettes

on a clandestine, candlelit night
flickering colors of passion
in kaleidoscope sighs.



♥♥





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Reviews

[Guardian]

It was really beautiful. There's a lot of love buried beneath the words. It's short but you make sure that every single word has meaning and is used effectively. The imagery was beautiful. "while breezes carry whispers
blushing dream" I particularly loved these lines. The piece flowed perfectly. I really liked it. Great job!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very pretty poem. Loved the ending. "In kaleidoscope sighs.' Very nice. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Samantha Ashley*]

I like this poem its romantic and relaxing. Very cool, it made me think of a starry night, candles everywhere, and glasses of wine. I like it, good job.

[robert]

Ah..The joy of love....well chosen words intermingled with fine prose. Remember??

[Pamela A. Lamppa]

"kaleidoscope sighs" I love that. Beautiful as was expected. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Wonderful poetry. ~Pamela

[R J Askew]

Drilling into the words, I notice the emphasis seems to be on the i i i's and l l l's with the poem coming to a head with 'on a clandestine, candle-lit night'...like that line it trips off the tongue nicely. Clandestine, huh? O the sheer wicked delight of this dance!

[Wicahpi]

Wonderfully descriptive. I love this!

[Rain]

Oh, the joy of love. What an emotion! It can make you sail. It can hurt like hell. This piece you were sailing. Loved it. Rain..

[An Open Venue]

I see flowers edging cobblestones in a cafe' open long after closing time... :)

Beautiful

Ven

[Wondering Mind]

How beautifully you leave the reader with images of intimate passion in your unique "lady" way.