Painting Love In Whispers~

love,love.love

 

 

Painting my love in whispers

as wind bridges the distance
from my brush
to your doorstep

Take these petals I blow

to fill your nights
with my scent

peeking from your pillow
into your dreams.

Let me be the flutter

that awakens you
as beads of memory fill your face
finding your heart fumbling

to catch your breath.



♥♥



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Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

A brilliant opening line for such a beautiful write. Wonderfully done!

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I love this. Soft, beautiful and eloquently written. A lot of detail in such few words. Very romantic.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Oh So Beautiful! Now that is a whisper. Well done!


This part takes my breath away.


Let me be the flutter

that awakens you
as beads of memory fill your face
finding your heart fumbling

to catch your breath.


You must tell me how you made the hearts