a change

just a brife thought

The niceties we acquire,

 Never live up to our desires,

 They can never call your name.

 

 What a shame what a shame,

 We are all the same,

 Isn’t that lame?

 

Forever on a lustful touch,

We now have too much, too much,

Never mind the useless and weak.

 

A Change, A Change

This is, this but a word,

To Save, To Save

 

What is that but courageous.

Author's Note

give me you best shot

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Words don't mean much from liars. We will need courageous people to create change. Won't be a easy task. A lot of men and woman with wealth as their dreams blocking the common man from a good life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Geralyn Miller]

How right you are .
The world has experimented with trickle down economics before; the rich got richer, the poor got poorer, the middle class vanished. The end results of two of these experiments were the French revolution and the Russian revolution. Those who do not remember history are doomed to repeat it.

[Erin]

Style and vocabulary were excellent. I like the message a lot -- you deliver it well. It's probably the best thing about this poem, really. Great job.
PBP

[A.r. Bazian]

ok... this is creative! structured... not in the best form! but its built! very creative.
now in content... man you rock! i loved it!

seriously

keep 'em coming

[Dionysios]

Very true, Robert. Excellent flow, great balance and dynamism in your words.