Sharing

With you the words flow freely,

To fill the space and time,

That we share this day between us,

In pleasure so sublime.

With you I share my deepest thoughts,

The truest hopes and fears,

The memories of the past,

And wishes for the coming years.

This connection that we feel,

Is complete and total in its trust,

A connection I have never felt,

And a love that is so just.

I hope for others that they find,

A partner for the soul such as we have found,

And they can share their inner thoughts,

As we share love unbound.

Reviews

[Emberlorna]

I love poems about love. This was so beautiful & refreshing.. full of such honesty & hope. A very nice read :}

["writing by" KS]

How lovely. Perfectly put. Big smiles:)

[quinfinn]

ah, living within that bubble is grand , is it not? you have a gentle way of expressing yourself which i am sure the ladies find irrestible, especially your own... another glorious tribute to the bane of my existence......love.

[David Scott]

To be in love... Fresh and new to the heart and pen of the poet, but a song as old as the molten lava pusing beneath the Earth's crust.
I'm glad to read this and that your heart feels the inspiration to pen it. There is hope yet while love still lives.
Keep "Sharing".

[s y e]

Wow. This was powerful! Nice job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and hopeful poem. Two people must hold trust and always be kind to each other. Hard to do always. A wise man hold on to silence when rage is about to take over. I like the desire and hope in the outstanding poem.
Coyote