Harmony

The connection between us seems to be

Beyond the realm of fantasy

The energy that permeates and flows between our bodies

Is beyond the explanations of man

I feel your feelings

I sense your yearnings

I bask in your joys

I am as one with you

Trying to decipher the mystery of us

I find no earthly basis for these sublime connections

Seeking answers made of man

Leaves incomplete the understanding of our love

You feel my feelings

You sense my yearnings

You bask in my joy

You are as one with me

The answer may lie on a higher plane

The spirit connects where earthly bonds fall short

The answer of our love

May fall within the sphere of the divine

We feel our feelings

We sense our yearnings

We bask in our joys

We are as one in harmony

With each other and the world

Reviews

[Natasha]

i like the repetition of the one stanza, i think it ties the poem together well- i like the psychologicla aspect of the poem and tend to fully understand the way the author tries to take you to another place/realm/land. i like the "I find no earthly basis for these sublime connections" line the best and feel it was a strong and powerful sentence. good work!

[David Scott]

I enjoyed the sentiment and the artistry of the wording. However, for my taste, I would like a better poetic construct if it were meter, rhym, or form. I may have missed the pattern though. Enjoyed the read still.

[sharonlee]

Graceful and tender write.


Spiritual Connections
have you ever felt you've known someone
since before the birth of time
and that your reincarnated souls
follow the same life-line.
Sharonlee

[Emberlorna]

This is just amazing. If only all lovers were connected in this way. Beautiful write :}

[quinfinn]

so many people feel that what you describe is an unattainable place. your words and conveyance of such prove those people wrong. well done!

[Ees]

I think I know that feeling that you are speaking of. In the last line of the first stanza something sounds off, but I am not sure what, so you may want to give that one another look...
I absolutely love the third stanza!
Nice poem. I don't fully believe it. It just sounds like a momentary special-ness to me. But I could just be a cynical b***h.

Overall I think this a really nice poem.

[PoemsbyPatrick]

Ees,
Once again you challenge me, and I thank you gladly for that, knowing that it is sincere. I have altered the first stanza, see what you think.

So, as to your cynical b***h nature, too bad because this is valid and true. I can provide a reference if you wish... believe.

Patrick

[Ees]

For some reason I cannot remember the way that it was last night or morning or what ever time it was when I read this in that line. For some reason it still sounds, I don't know, flat....

Did you just call me a b***h?! hahaha, I'm kidding. I don't need references and for you to prove this, I just think that those feelings that you described morph into different things.

I only write things if I think it may help, never to be mean, so thanks for understanding that. You seriously don't have to take my advice though.

[Dark Butterfly]

lol first review! i rule!!!!! lol good job, interesting poem!