I Ask Myself of You

Reflecting on the time we have

Reviewing as I do

The nature of my life and mind

I ask myself of you

In such short history I've found

The meaning has come true

Of the fullness of my feelings

For life and loving you

To think of life without you now

Would certainly undo

The core of my being and life

Would have an empty view

You are essential to me now

No other love will do

I dedicate my soul and life

To only loving you

Reviews

[marytownsend]

Beautiful, heartfelt poem! It flows nicely and is full of meaning!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

"The core of my being and life
Would have an empty view

You are essential to me now
No other love will do
I dedicate my soul and life
To only loving you"

That part, oh my gosh, I can totally relate, that's definitely my favorite part. But actually, I love this entire poem! It's so beautiful and full of emotion, especially love, you did an amazing job with this, great write!

[sharonlee]

Tender thoughts... elegantly penned.

[Aehr]

very true, pure piece... i can see the dedication for your lover in this poem. i love the honesty of the piece.

[mandy]

very nice....a true love is expressed in this...

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise person know when he had happiness. Hold on and appreciate their pardner. I like the purpose and the ending to the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[quinfinn]

beautifully expressed my friend. one gets the distinct impression that this love you so freely and affectionally speak of is genuine and non contrived. a happy man is a serene man. well written!

[AleyshaRosa]

It has a calm euphoria. A ingenuity that brings a smile to my lips-- your honesty of the love you feel is refreshing.
Koodoos

[Elizabeth]

This is sweet without being overly saccharine. It has a gentleness to it, almost like waves lapping at the sand. Which is appropriate, because real life long love has the same rhythm to it.