I Will Love You Fully

I Will Love You Fully

A Poem by PoemsbyPatrick
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I know the feeling is mutual, but let me state my case.

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Love may not be only this,
The passion, happiness and ecstasy.
I would gladly hold you in your worst moments,
And chase your cares away.
Let me banish the worries from your mind.
Let me drive the ghosts from your past.
Let me shield you from the onslaught of the world.
Let me love you wholly, truthfully, and complete,
Through the good times and the bad.
Then, when passion, happiness and ecstasy,
Find their way into our love,
We will relish in their joy,
And I will love you fully.

© 2012 PoemsbyPatrick


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This is beautifully written! The flow of the words and the emotion is powerful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


While I'm sure this was written straight from the heart, it borders dangerously close to greeting card territory. Sometimes poems like this were more of a personal experience for the writer, but this doesn't always translate to the reader.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah, this is incredibly sweet. Isn't this the kind of love that everyone searches for? I know it's what I desire. Beautifully written, thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great profession of love. Enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a lovely dedication and way to show the full love you feel for someone, very sweet and honest, thank you for sharing this.

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I almost teared up, especially at the end when the passion and the healing is
over and the love and joy is what's left over.....good write, dana

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow, we all want to be loved fully,,just like that,,very nice..

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is extremely beautiful and loving, full of emotion(:

This part:

"I would gladly hold you in your worst moments,
And chase your cares away.
Let me banish the worries from your mind.
Let me drive the ghosts from your past.
Let me shield you from the onslaught of the world."

That's my favorite(: that's the type of guy that every girl wants, and whoever you're writing this about seems lucky enough to have found someone like that. Great write(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful and positive poem of love. Love is hard. It is a worthwhile journey. Take patience and kindness like stated in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh.
my.
god!

this is so super amazingly fantastically... cute! very sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dark Butterfly

12 Years Ago

i totally agree with this chick!

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Added on October 31, 2012
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