Come in From the Cold

Come in from the cold,

Join me by the fire.

I'll wrap you in my love,

Show you my desire.

The warmth of passion glowing bright,

When I hold you near.

I'll wrap you in my love,

Chase away your fear.

By the fire's amber glow,

I'll seek into your eyes.

Speak truly, long and lovingly,

Where both our bodies lie.

The night is cold, the fire warm,

My love for you is true.

I'll shield from the world's worst,

With love I lust for you.

Reviews

[mandy]

sigh,,i could feel those warm flames heating up my blood,,,,

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. Good to have a place to rest and be safe and warm. Good desire in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[quinfinn]

a humble and faithful declaration of love and longing, well written and lovingly expressed.

[Ees]

I like this poem a lot. I like fires on chilly nights. Maybe it's the hurricane out there in conjunction with you lovely poetry, but this reminds me of an ice storm we had a year or two ago in which I spent a fair amount of time with my beloveds before a glowing fire.
Your poems are so loving, it's hard to critique those sort of emotions. I don't write so romantically...

[Dr. Wood ?]

I too agree with Chris that this lack something....Maybe you are saying the same thing in each verse. it doesn't seem to go anywhere..Maybe if it was shorter..punchier

[Mia]

"With love I lust for you."
This is sweet and full of love!

[G!o]

I agree with Chris, the tempo is a bit low but in general this a sincere poem and your choice of words matches the scene. Good writing.

[rnuff]

I enjoyed this write, it's sincere

[AleyshaRosa]

Mmmm
Make me want to sleep; to dream. This poem is, as always, beautiful. Your rhyme scheme, the flow, most abundantly, the tone...
Mmmm

Koodoos

[Chris]

I understand what you're saying but the flow of the words just doesn't "feel" quite right to me... its a bit vague but its what I felt.