Sunday Morning

Sunday morning sunrise,

Come to greet the day.

I bring you near,

To hold the world at bay.

Sunday morning sleepy,

Slowly start to wake.

I smell your body next to me,

And reach your hand to take.

Sunday morning stirring,

My senses are fulfilled.

Embraced within your arms,

My anxious heart is stilled.

Sunday morning bright,

With passion's full enthrall.

Locked within a lovers clench,

With ecstasy for all.

Sunday morning paused,

To catch our second wind.

Words of love and kindness,

Are shared from hearts within.

Sunday morning passes,

We're off to chase the day.

When Sunday morning comes again,

Don't let it slip away.

Reviews

[mandy]

sweet! great, as usual, patrick

[quinfinn]

absolutely.....carpe diem is what i believe in. a touching tribute to the nuances of romantic interludes which are catch as catch can. well written!

[Anu Biswas]

How languorous and glorious. One wishes that one's sunday mornings were that decadent. The only line that broke my reverie was in the fourth verse last line.....with ecstasy for all....the 'all' was too generic and kinda broke the bond between two very sensual people. As if suddenly other people intruded on their world. Great job!

[DrD]

Well structured and designed, rounded off with a conclusion summarizing the theme. I enjoyed it.

[G!o]

This good and well written Patrick, i love it and it is comfortable to read. Keep up the good writing.

[AleyshaRosa]

No words could be said truer of a Sunday morning.
And...
Golly, Patrick.
That's all I can conjure....
Koodoos

[forevermore1218]

I really like your style whether it be a different rhyme scheme or the way you format your stanzas. However I would suggest not using periods in your sentences because they are so short and not complete. The use of commas is understandable for a small pause, however make sure you use them not so often. I enjoy your work and encourage you to keep doing what you do :)

well done mate

[Ees]

Sounds entirely different than "Sunday Morning Comin' down" which I think I relate to more than this. Though this is lovely and wonderful, it is just nothing that I have ever experienced. Lovely morning poem. Very comfortable and sweet. Good job!

[PoemsbyPatrick]

When you get the chance, take it. I am sure you will find it memorable. thank you for your review.

[Ees]

no problem.
Actually you just inspired me to write a poem about my favorite sort of morning. lol. I think I called it Morning Bonding.

[Dr. Wood ?]

quite lovely Patrick.....A poem full of love

[PoemsbyPatrick]

thank you for the kind words.

[JustAnotherDreamer]

When I read this, I can't help but feel at peace. This scene is so serene but passionate at the same time, and it is completely heartwarming, and it also leave my body missing an embrace from someone. This is a really nicely written piece. Kudos to you my friend.

[PoemsbyPatrick]

Sunday morning with someone you love. Nothing better when the world let's you be.