She doubted herself

There hasn't been a time where a woman didn't doubt herself. Sadly, there hasn't.

She thought she was a disaster, 

 she said she had flaws, 

 but she was a beautiful dancer, 

 she just ignored the applause. 

 She was smart and innocent, 

 and sang so beautifully, 

 some people even called her an instrument,

 but she said that's lunacy. 

 He saw her as a jewelry, 

 he saw the way she moved,

 he heard her signing voice, 

 and fell for all her flaws, 

 those are what made his choice. 

 He thought she was more than beautiful, 

 he tore her tears every single day, 

 he stood by her side and wanted to stay, 

 but yet she was standing there, 

 and thought he didn't care.

Reviews

[Red Rose]

Indeed it's true!
Doubting oneself is a process in life to make you better or bitter..
Beautifully captured!
Keep writing :)

[poemsbya]

Thank you! I will :D

[Jimmy Yetts]

The nature of a human relationship--a love relationship--is complex.
Very fine work, poetess.

[poemsbya]

Indeed. Thank you very much!