The Rose and You

The Rose and You

A Story by Tim
"

Some nights as I sit and and look up at the night sky you come to mind.

"

As I gaze upon the rose
 I can only think of you

 
As beauty radiates from the rose
As does beauty radiate from you
 
As I touch the softness of its petals
I long for the softness of your skin
 
As the fragrance of the rose stimulates my senses
I long for your sweet fragrance.
 
As I look upon the stem
I see your strength
 
As I as look at the leaves
I see your continual growth as a woman
 
As I touch the thorns
My heart feels the pain
 

 

© 2008 Tim


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Very deep in a captive sort
of way

The way your soft flow of the
rose you portrayed was brilliant

You did a great job writing this
beautiful piece of art

Great job!

Orlando M

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hi Tim,

What a wonderful first read of you I have found. It is tender and loving . Very beautiful tribute to the rose and to the lady that you were thinking of when this beauty was written.

Blessings,
Lesa

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is so lovely, tender and loving. A rare poem from the hand and mind of a man who knows his plants.

Thank you for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very nice..check out my rose bush poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


How often a woman has been compared to a rose, and for many good reasons. I, too, have felt those thorns. You're poem is excellent, Tim.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tim
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