Bluebird

While walking I saw a bluebird and was reminded How not to long ago their numbers were way down due to loss of habitat.

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Bluebird sing your song

How you were almost gone

With the help of some who did long

To once again hear your song

You have now come back strong

So bluebird sing your melody

For it is beautiful music to me

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is just delightful as well as informative. The metre, rhythm, almost suggests a flitting, flying bird, intentional or not, it really adds to the movement of the poem.

'So bluebird sing your melody / For it is beautiful music to me' = so lovely.

Thank you for sharing your love of the wild, again.

[Holly]

Yes, we do need to hear more beautiful music.

[DanaRegen]

Tim,
This is a lovely poem, thanks for entering it in my contest, and good luck! Bluebirds are marvolous creatures, so great work in captureing their song in such a good poem. Nicely done!

[Sister Suzie]

Lovely write Thanks for entering

[Aspiring Angel]

Hi Time,

What a delightful read this was. I could almost hear the song of the Bluebird myself which I am exactly sure is what were your intentions. So many of our beautiful creatures of our earth are deminishing in number. I am so glad that the Bluebird was saved. It has such a beautiful song bringing an uplift to the heart when it is heard.

Blessings,
Lesa

[Laura E. Aranda]

Yah! I love the hopeful optimisticness...So sad we almost lost such a richly colored beauty....so sad. Cheers,lea

[The Devil's Own B***h]

This is stunning. The flow, rhythm and rhyme are supurb. A real pleasure to read!

An absolutely awesome piece!!!!

Josie

[T]

I absolutely adore this little ode, Tim ... I'm a morning person and I love to get up at dawn and reflect on my thoughts while sipping on my coffee listening to the birds ... So beautiful ... hugs

[Samuel Dickens]

A nice ode to the pretty bird. I wasn't aware of their peril, but I'm glad their numbers are improving.

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Wow, very powerful, I love the mood in this as I read it. It was so calm and very nice. I love the flow, the time. everything. I thank you very much for posting this.

S.D.Blankenship the GOTHICCOWBOY