By the Light of the Moon

By the Light of the Moon

A Poem by Tim



By the light of the moon
He sat beneath the tree

By the light of the moon
He sat close to thee

By the light of the moon
On your nose he went to plant a kiss

By the light of the moon
He did miss

By the light of the moon
It landed on your lips

By the light of the moon
As he gently touched your face with his finger tips

By the light of the moon
She slowly undressed

By the light of the moon
Her body he caressed

By the light of the moon
With her tongue she did tease

By the light of the moon
Her, he sought to please.

By the light of the moon
The stars became bright

By the light of the moon
AS they both reached their delight

© 2008 Tim


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This is lovely... you've written a dream of a poem and, so fluently, smoothly.

'By the light of the moon
On your nose he went to plant a kiss

By the light of the moon
He did miss'

That's so tender and sweet

Plus, you've written some quite sizzling words too... what more can I say... it's a great poem and I truly hope to read lots more.

So hope you'll post some of your 'outdoor' ones too.. you really have the knack of of making Nature come alive on this cold online surface...

Thank you so much for sharing. Take care




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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By the light of the moon is a most romantic poem, it's passionate and gentle as well. A well written poem Tim.
Check the second stanza though. You wrote 'By they light of the moon' I think you wanted to write the word 'the' correct me if I'm wrong, be well, Holly

Posted 16 Years Ago


A lovely poem , truly enjoyed reading it....so tender and sweet are your words.Thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet and erotic all the same! This is a romantic write. I loved the comedy of him missing, and the sexiness of innocence expressed!
Fantastic Write!
JaniceAnn

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely... you've written a dream of a poem and, so fluently, smoothly.

'By the light of the moon
On your nose he went to plant a kiss

By the light of the moon
He did miss'

That's so tender and sweet

Plus, you've written some quite sizzling words too... what more can I say... it's a great poem and I truly hope to read lots more.

So hope you'll post some of your 'outdoor' ones too.. you really have the knack of of making Nature come alive on this cold online surface...

Thank you so much for sharing. Take care




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tim
Tim

In New England



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I am an easy going person who loves the outdoors and everything that goes with it. Hiking , canoeing, fishing and gardening I was born and raised in New England. I am currently working on buildin.. more..

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