Thunder and Lighting

I will hold you tight

When the lighting flashes

I will calm your fright

When the thunder crashes

I will dry your tears 

When the storms abound

I will soothe your fears

with my arms wrapped around

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Seems a long while since you last posted a poem, time to find time to do so could be a new year's resolution, sir. Wishing you and your large family a very happy new year.

[Ladysue]

What a genuinely beautifully poem. A pleasure to read.

[Summer boy]

When you see perfect rhymes these days, with a theme which is so personal to every man, you're definitely gonna read it with a big smile.

More than that, this poem takes me back to my own childhood, with a relationship with literatures, I felt like an old friend coming back to me.
To make a perfect poem, we don't need to put days of planning and years of editing. We can make a perfect and beautiful one just from our true heart.
This remind me why we all started penning ourselves out at the first place.

Loved to see such a poem. Looking forward to read you more.

[emmajoy]

What a dear and delightful poem, Tim.. No idea why I've not reviewed it before now.. so very sorry. You really should find time for your muse to get you writing again.

Hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving, my old Literati buddy/ (Okay, not too much emphasis on the ;old!_

Best wishes to your dear family. Hope life is settled or settling for everyone.

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

This is so wonderful, Enjoyed the read. awesome

[Tim]

Thank you for your review. The poem was written for a friend who is deathly afraid of t storms

[Kelly Scheppers]

Having two arms wrapped around you is the best assurance one could have. Nice to meet you, Tim.

[Levi Levin]

A great poem that depicts care and concern for someone else.... great job!

[Tiana]

Absolutely beautiful, Tim!