Broke down (in progress)

Broke down (in progress)

A Poem by Tyler James Mathieson
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In progress

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There are times that I stop to think about the day I broke down
There are days that I am still stunned by the silence, so loud
I lie awake at night trying not to focus on the pain
Spurred on by the bravery I am trying to feign

© 2012 Tyler James Mathieson


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Really enjoyed this poem and hope there'll be more coming soon.
Presents so many emotions.
As a single mum can relate to the last line.


Posted 12 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this write, amazing writing here

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the second line it is really sad and somehow scary. I enjoyed this poem even though it is in progress.
-Sabrina

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the vibe on this one

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2012
Last Updated on June 13, 2012
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